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Clearly Distinct by flamewarflipsides

:iconiammemyself:
Alright broski here goes:
Vision: You did a good job of recreating a character from Pokemon whom I am not familiar with at all.
Originality: You told me it was basically from a cutscene so I docked you some marks.
Technique: You have an amazing, unique art style that comes through in spades on this piece.
Impact: Overall it's not very exciting, just sort of a standard profile of a character, so your impact is so-so.

Suggestions:
I think the visor of his hat is facing the wrong direction a bit, it should be pointed more at the viewer I believe. But I could be wrong.
Also the bottom side of his hair is a bit flat for the amount of wind we're believing is going through it.
The collar and tie of his shirt are facing the viewer but the rest of him isn't...looks a bit odd.
On the other hand, the colouring is amazing particularly on the hair and face.
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flamewarflipsides Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the input! This is exactly the kind of feedback I've been hoping to get regarding the perspective and the direction he's facing. I knew something was off but I couldn't quite figure out what the problems were; this helps a lot.

And yeah, it's not the most original scene; I'm really surprised there aren't more attempts to render that scene in something larger than teeny tiny sprites out there.

Thanks for the feedback. This kinda stuff will really help me improve the next time!
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iammemyself Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome.
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